А ну-ка, англофоны!

[spamsink]

Что вы можете сказать о корректности фразы


Me deliberately making a mistake is incredibly rare.


Всё ли в ней правильно с точки зрения нормативной грамматики? Если нет, то в чём заключается ошибка (или, если угодно, коллоквиализм, не сильно годный для письменной речи)? И тогда как её (его) поправить?

Comments

[sassa_nf]

My deliberately......

[archaicos]

Deliberate mistake... Что-то не очень логичное.

[vit_r]

Язык всегда предполагает некоторую вольность использования. Фраза корявая и просто переформулируют всё.

[dijifi]

## Grammatically Correct Alternatives

1. "I rarely make mistakes deliberately."
2. "Deliberately making mistakes is highly unusual for me."
3. "It is incredibly rare for me to deliberately make mistakes."

## More Concise Phrasing

1. "I seldom make mistakes on purpose."
2. "Deliberately erring is out of character for me."
3. "Intentional mistakes are most uncommon in my case."

## More Expressive Phrasing

1. "I can scarcely bring myself to make mistakes on purpose."
2. "Deliberately flubbing things is completely foreign to my nature."
3. "The notion of me purposefully bungling something is all but unthinkable."

The key improvements are:

- Using the correct personal pronoun (I/me)
- Rephrasing to be more concise and natural-sounding
- Adding more expressive language to convey the rarity of the action

— perplexity

[juan_gandhi]

Тут вроде "слетела шляпа". Чтобы что-то было rare, это надо само "making a mistake", т.е. "my making a mistake" - а тут "me making", и подлежащее "me", ну и глупо выходит.

[whocares1970]

Deliberately making a mistake is incredibly rare for me.

[sobriquet9]

Making a deliberate mistake on my part is incredibly rare.

[pilpilon]

Me deliberately making a mistake is incredibly inconceivable